these feet
delicately glide
deftly guide
my lifethese legs
solidly support
sexily entwine
my spiritthis hand
lightly caresses
tightly holds
my lovethis skin
softly embraces
smoothly shields
my worldthis heart
deeply adores
sweetly controls
my soul
Done for Poetry Thursday
7 replies on “my song”
A lovely description of what I have to believe is a lovely soul..thanks,M
Thanks for that, M
Oh, very nice. I like concise little things that have a lot to say. Beautiful imagery, too.
Nicely done.
Thanks guys. Sometimes simple works well. 😀
lLovely piece 😀
You have quite a gift with internal/slant rhyme and repetition. Nice rhythm to the lines.